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When twelve-year-old Andrea Carter brought her
golden palomino mare to a skidding halt near her favorite fishing spot, she
expected to find a bubbling, splashing creek full of trout just waiting to be
snatched up for supper.
Instead, she found a dead man.
Face down, he lay sprawled in the middle of a nearly dry creek bed. Thick,
dark mud plastered his clothes and head. One hand dangled limply in a pool of
dirty water. The creek, which usually ran strong and fast year round, trickled
past the lifeless stranger in shallow, muddy channels.
Andi swallowed her shock and fought to calm her racing heart. She knew she had
to dismount and see if the man was really dead, but she couldn’t move.
Gripping Taffy’s reins, she glanced over her shoulder at the two riders
galloping toward her.
This is what I get for always coming in first, she
thought. Her heart thumped wildly. Next time we race, Cory can win. Let him
find the nasty surprises!
“I’m not going near any dead man—not by myself,” she muttered. “You
hear me, Taffy? We stay put until Cory and Rosa catch up.”
A minute later Cory reined his chestnut gelding alongside Andi and made a
face. “You beat me, but it wasn’t a fair race. I didn’t see that little
gully until…” His voice trailed off. “What’s the matter, Andi?”
She pointed toward the creek bed. “Him.”
Cory’s eyes grew round.
Rosa pulled up on her sorrel and gasped. “¡Dios mío!” She crossed
herself and mumbled a quick prayer. “¿Quién es? ¿Qué pasó?
Andi shook her head. “I don’t know who he is, and I don’t know what
happened. I-I didn’t want to do anything until you got here.”
Cory dismounted and tossed his reins around a scraggly branch of a scrub oak.
“Let’s go see. Maybe he’s not as dead as he looks. We should leastways
get him out of the mud.” He grinned. “I didn’t figure we’d be fishing
a fella out of your creek today, Andi. I’d kinda counted on trout.”
Andi dropped to the ground and tied up her horse, not smiling. She didn’t
find anything funny about a dead man half-buried in the creek bottom. She
looked up at Rosa, still mounted. “Aren’t you coming?”
Rosa shook her head. “I will stay with the horses for now.”
For once, Andi Carter agreed with her cautious Mexican friend. This wasn’t
the kind of mess Andi usually stumbled into. Trampling the schoolmaster during
a spur-of-the-moment horse race or breaking a window playing baseball was more
her style; even a close call with an unbroken horse, or crashing into her
brother’s law office during an important meeting with a client, but not
this. Not a dead man.
She shivered, in spite of the blistering California heat.
“Andi! You coming?” Cory hollered and clambered down the shallow creek
bank. “Hurry. I might need help.”
Andi sighed. “I guess I’d better help him,” she said to Rosa. She
scurried over the bank after her friend and grimaced her way through the
squishy, stinking mud. Each step sank her deeper into the muck. By the time
she reached Cory, the legs of her overalls were splattered with mud. She
squatted next to her friend and swallowed.
Close up, the man looked very dead. His face was ashen between the
streaks of dirt. “Is he…is he…?”
Cory turned and looked relieved. “Nope. Not dead yet. I shook him, and he
moaned.”
Andi let out the breath she’d been holding. “That’s good.”
Cory shook his head. “But he’s in bad shape. There’s no telling how long
he’s been here. A day? A week? He’s not dead right now, but he won’t
last much longer if we don’t get him out of the sun and into some shade.”
He reached under the man’s shoulders and yanked. Nothing happened. “He’s
stuck tight.”
Andi jumped up to help, but no amount of grunting and groaning and heaving
moved the man so much as an inch. “What’re we going to do?” She panted
and let the man’s arms drop to the ground. “Even with Rosa’s help,
we’re never going to get him out on our own. We’re not strong enough.”
“One of us could ride to your place and bring back some of the ranch hands
to help,” Cory suggested.
“That’ll take too long,” Andi said. She glanced up to where Rosa sat in
the shade. She’d dismounted and was leaning against the trunk of an old oak.
“I’ve got an idea. I’ll be right back.”
A few minutes later she returned, carrying a coil of rope from her saddle,
which she thrust into Cory’s hands. “Here. Loop this end under his arms
and across his shoulders. Then cinch it up.” She whistled, and Taffy stepped
to the edge of the creek bank. Rosa stood beside her. “Here, Rosa,” Andi
hollered and tossed the rest of the rope at her friend. “Tie it around the
saddle horn. Then slowly back Taffy up when we say so.”
“Got it,” Cory said from his place next to the unconscious man. He shook
his head. “Hope this doesn’t kill him.”
“We’ll go slow,” Andi said. She signaled to Rosa, who began to lead the
palomino away from the creek. Gently, Andi and Cory held the limp form and
waited. The rope went taut, and the man moaned. Then, with a loud sucking
sound, the mud gave way and he slid quickly toward the bank.
“Hold up!” Cory shouted. The rope went slack. “Now pull him along real
careful, Rosa.” Slipping and sliding, they guided the stranger up and over
the creek bank and into the shade of the oak.
“I don’t think that did him much good,” Andi squatted beside the
unconscious man and brushed at the caked mud and dirt on her overalls. “You
suppose he’s still alive?”
Cory dropped down beside her. “Let’s roll him over and see.”
As soon as they rolled him over, Andi shook him. “Mister, are you all right?
Wake up.” She waited for a reply, but none came. The stranger lay still as
death. “Go get your canteen,” she told Cory. “A little water might be
just the trick. I caught Mitch napping under a tree a few Sundays back and
poured a whole pitcher of water over his head. I never saw anybody wake up so
fast!”
“Bet he was hoppin’ mad, too,” Cory said with a grin. Then he sprang to
his feet and went after the canteen. “Did you catch it for soaking your
brother?” he asked, dropping the canteen at Andi’s feet.
“Yep. Mitch tossed me in the horse trough. And that was the end of it.”
She picked up the canteen and unscrewed the lid. “Here goes. Hope it wakes
him up.” A stream of lukewarm water spilled onto the man’s face.
It was a miracle the way the man yelped and tried to sit up. He slapped his
hands wildly against his face and sputtered, “You trying to—trying to—drown me?” His voice cracked, and he fell back with a groan.
Andi sat back on her heels, astonished. “It worked! Even on a
half-dead fella.”
Cory whistled. “I’ll say.” He brought his face close to the man’s.
“You know how close you came to never waking up, mister? We pulled you out
of the creek, and none too soon. Another day or two in this heat and you’d
have been buzzard bait.”
Andi winced at Cory’s blunt words. But at least the man was alive. For now.
The stranger rubbed his face, took a deep breath, and sat up. “Reckon I owe
you kids some thanks.” He studied Andi through narrow, bloodshot eyes and
pointed at the canteen. “Mind if I put some of that on the inside?”
She handed it over.
The man bent his head back and took gulp after gulp of water before emptying
the rest of it over his filthy head. Then he tossed the canteen aside and ran
his fingers through his dripping hair. “Much obliged.” He swayed and
looked ready to collapse. It was clear that even this short activity had
drained him. “I feel like a herd of cattle ran right over the top of me.”
“Who are you?” Andi asked, “And how did you end up in the middle of the
creek?”
The stranger leaned his head against the tree trunk and closed his eyes.
“Name’s T.J. Silver. I have no idea how I got here. I don’t even know
where I am.” He opened his eyes. “This California?”
“Yes.”
T.J. nodded. “Good. Last thing I remember was finishing up a very
unfriendly game of cards with the worst poker players I ever laid eyes
on.” He settled himself more comfortably against the tree and sighed. “I
cleaned ’em out pretty good, but I guess they were poor losers and wanted
their money back. I don’t recall exactly how they did it, but I think they
got it.” He winced and clutched his stomach with both arms. “Something
don’t feel right.”
Andi and Cory carefully pushed T.J.’s arms aside. A bright red streak showed
through the muddy shirt. Cory gingerly tugged open the shirt and gave a low
whistle. “Boy, oh boy, mister. Looks like somebody sliced you up. All your
moving around must’ve broke it open.”
T.J. dropped his gaze to his stomach and frowned. “Don’t remember how that
happened.”
“How long’s it been since that card game?” Andi stared at the bright red
wound. It was seeping blood slowly but steadily.
“Wednesday night.”
“Today’s Saturday.” Andi frowned. “No wonder you passed out, riding
around like that. You should see a doctor. Fresno’s not far—not more than
a couple hours.”
Cory handed T.J. the bandana from around his neck.
“I don’t need a doctor.” T.J. took the kerchief with a curt nod of
thanks. “I’ve lasted this long; I’ll go on living.” He stuffed the
fabric under his shirt and pressed his hand against his belly. “I just need
a few days rest and some grub, and I’ll be on my way.” He closed his eyes
and leaned back. “If you’ll hobble my gelding, I’d appreciate it.”
Andi frowned. “We didn’t see any horse.”
“He’s around here somewhere. Could you do a fella a favor and see if you
can find him, Miss…?” He paused and managed a weak smile.
“Carter,” Andi replied. “Andi Carter.” She nodded to her friends.
“And this is Cory Blake and Rosa Garduno.”
“A pleasure,” T.J. said. “Now…about my horse?”
It didn’t take long to find T.J.’s gelding. He was grazing on the parched,
brown grass not too far from where his rider had gone into the creek. The
horse lifted his head and gave a challenging whinny when the three young
riders drew near.
Andi brought Taffy to a stop and started to dismount.
“He doesn’t look friendly,” Cory warned. “Don’t get too close. Just
grab the reins and lead him back.”
Andi dropped to the ground and yanked open her saddlebags. With a confident
smile she brought out an apple and waved it at Cory. “I don’t know any
horse who’d turn down a treat like this.” Cautiously, she approached the
large bay gelding. “Easy, fella. Look what I’ve got for you.”
The horse pricked up his ears but kept his distance. He shook his mane and
snorted, then took a few careful steps toward Andi. His neck and flank were
dark with dried sweat.
“Be careful, Andi. Don’t spook him.”
Andi threw Cory a disgusted look and moved closer. “It’s all right,
fella.” She held out her hand. “Come get this apple, and I’ll take you
to your rider. Then I’ll get rid of that nasty saddle. What do you say?”
The horse walked over and took a bite from the apple. With her other hand,
Andi reached out and snagged the reins. “Come on. Let’s go back.”
Cory shook his head. “One of these days you’re gonna meet a horse that
doesn’t like you. Then what’ll you do?”
“I haven’t met one yet I couldn’t sweet-talk into behaving.” She gave
the bay a friendly pat and mounted Taffy.
“Oh, no?” Cory teased. “What about that wild stallion of Chad’s? I
seem to recollect hearing about a ruckus out at your place last spring.
Let’s see…” He snapped his fingers. “That’s it! You didn’t get
along real well with that big black horse and you almost—”
Andi bristled. “I don’t want to talk about that.”
Cory chuckled.
Back at T.J.’s “camp,” Andi loosened the cinch, and the heavy saddle
tumbled to the ground. The horse, freed at last from his uncomfortable burden,
lay down and rolled. Andi grinned. “That feels a lot better, doesn’t
it?”
“You really gonna stay here?” Cory was saying to T.J., “When you’re so
bad off?”
T.J.’s lips twisted into a lopsided grin. “I don’t favor bouncing around
on a horse for a couple hours just to see a doc. I’m feeling better
already.” He turned to Andi, who was at work hobbling T.J.’s horse.
“I’d be obliged if you let me stay up here on your ranch, Miss Carter. If
you really want to play Good Samaritan, you could rustle me up some grub and
bring it out here the next few days. What do you say to that?”
Andi traded glances with her friends. It was her decision. After all, it was
her family’s ranch this poor fellow had collapsed on. Cory lived in town,
too far away to be running errands back and forth. Rosa would go along with
whatever Andi decided, even if she didn’t approve—which she probably
didn’t by the look on her face.
“I think you should tell your brothers about this stranger,” Rosa said in
rapid Spanish. “Señor Chad will decide what is best to do.”
“Chad’s too busy haying to be bothered. Besides, it’s just for a few
days,” Andi answered in the same language. “The least we could do is bring
him a few supplies.”
T.J. spoke up. “All I’m asking is a little something to hold me over. You
can ride by on a fast horse and toss it to me if you’re uneasy. I’ll be
off your ranch before you know it.” He lowered his head. “I’d be much
obliged if you don’t mention my being up here. Those fellas who came after
me might still be in the area and eager to finish what they started.”
After a brief, whispered conference, Cory and Rosa reluctantly agreed to help
settle T.J. Silver with the food they’d brought and two canteens.
Andi spilled the contents of her saddlebags next to the man. A couple of
cloth-wrapped roast beef sandwiches tumbled onto the grass, along with a few
apples and half a dozen molasses cookies. “I can’t promise when I can
bring more.”
T.J. eyed the food with a hungry gleam and reached for a sandwich. He took a
huge bite. “This’ll hold me. Much obliged.” He nodded. “You three’ve
done me a good turn. I won’t be forgetting it.”
“I’m glad we could help, Mr. Silver,” Andi said. “I hope you heal up
real fast.”
“My friends call me T.J.,” he said between mouthfuls.
Andi smiled. “All right, T.J. Take care yourself. I’ll see you later.”
She grasped Taffy’s reins and swung into the saddle. Cory and Rosa joined
her, and the three riders headed out.
Andi felt her friends’ displeasure at her decision to keep quiet about T.J.
A sliver of worry that she wasn’t doing the right thing pricked her
conscience, but she shrugged it aside. They’re acting like a couple of
’fraidy cats, worried about nothing. What’s wrong with being kind to a
poor drifter?
Cory glanced at Andi and shook his head, as if he could read her thoughts.
“You’re making a mistake, Andi. A big one.” He touched his heels to his
chestnut’s flank and galloped away. (Taken from Kregel Publications release, Andrea Carter and the Family Secret © 2008 by Susan K. Marlow. Published by Kregel Publications, Grand Rapids, MI. Used by permission of the publisher. All rights reserved.) |
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